Chapter 1 ~ Clipped Wings

posted 06 Apr 2012 01:00 pm

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05 Apr 2012 01:41 am

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I wasn't quite sure how to word the last part that well xD... I couldn't think of the right word for it xD.

Oh wells, for clarification, basically if she ever tries to go buying from a store or stay at a hotel/inn, she will not be able to get anything. All the people within the city is not permitted to lend any sort of assistance, nor sell/trade with her.

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06 Apr 2012 01:39 pm

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were you looking for exiled? and i like the page~~ great job!

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06 Apr 2012 05:54 pm

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@fellfree:

I thought of that too xD... But she's not exactly kicked out of the city. She can still talk, but the people in the city may not sell/trade or assist her with shelter.

But thanks for trying to help =D! Appreciate it ^^

Glad you like it =D

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06 Apr 2012 08:48 pm

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@xox1melly1xox: aah, ok. ^^ sorry i couldn't be of more help then~

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06 Apr 2012 09:53 pm

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hrm...

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@xox1melly1xox: maybe you could've said something like her being treated like a criminal... or like an outsider... or something along those lines xD now it's bugging me since i'm trying to think of a word that fits this... and i feel like i know it... it's on the tip of my tongue but i just can't place it >///<

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06 Apr 2012 10:21 pm

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wow!! I like your artework!

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06 Apr 2012 11:23 pm

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i can tell she's upset

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06 Apr 2012 11:23 pm

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@Kiel95:
Hmm.. criminal might be a it too... weird? Outsider might somewhat work, but it doesn't give the feeling of being rejected by everyone within the city. The closest suggestion I got from another person in school was outcast, but that's similar to outsider as well xD...

Thanks for the suggestions ^^!

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06 Apr 2012 11:24 pm

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@Andrea C.Castro:
Thanks ^^

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06 Apr 2012 11:34 pm

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07 Apr 2012 07:35 am

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:3

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@xox1melly1xox: haha xD well i like this anyways :) even without perfect wording it's good

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07 Apr 2012 03:59 pm

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I like the (new?) layout! :)

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08 Apr 2012 01:07 am

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Two days late, but good to see you're still going!

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08 Apr 2012 09:40 am

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@LinnHansen:

Thanks! xD... Took me a while to figure out how to edit the layout somewhat xD

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08 Apr 2012 09:41 am

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@rmo33:

xD yup

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